02-21-2017, 06:32 AM
(02-21-2017, 05:59 AM)sau Wrote: *sau hails King Peru
btw last line should be.. else thou may find thyself banished to the Dutch Hill. Rhyming words XD
Nice Poem TEF!
Thou art incorrect, young, feeble peasant! It is meant to rhyme with "much"—it follows the pattern of A, B, A, B, C, D, C, D, E, E. And, for the record, poetry needn't follow any rhyming criteria at all to be poetry!

Peru
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