05-15-2009, 10:26 AM
(05-14-2009, 01:30 AM)TEF™ link Wrote: The comma there is both unnecessary and incorrect.You need to either quote or italicize the words someone else used in their post, else you're merely saying the words yourself. (Oh, and you yet again misused the comma.)
Let's see how it works out...
On second thought, why the fuck is "a lonely" in there in the first place? Let's try again...
That's much better, though I used American English. In British English, it'd be something like this:
Can you spot the difference?
[me=TEF™]edits his post to include an in-game quote...[/me]
The commas mean there's a slight breather before saying 'fail'. And the lonely I meant he used an I on it's own, as he used the letter I in words.
Saying 'While you fail' is just saying he fails without using that slight breather making it more...me. Similar to when people use three dots.
Another Munch victim

![[Image: 250qywk.jpg]](http://i30.tinypic.com/250qywk.jpg)