I'm an author/writer and I take it very seriously. I am hoping for this to be my career. So, people, If you can and want to, I will start PM-ing chapters of my stories to you. The reason I'm doing this is because I need feedback, good or bad, on them. I'm very hard on myself and I need some criticism. The stories I'll PM are as follows:
TriBlood: Slightly darker than the rest of my stories but only Dark when it's necessary to the plot. The main character is named Lynexon (that is why my name is Lynexon on here), and he is part Demon, Human, and Vampire. The story takes place after a, what is thought to be, a nuclear disaster. After it, Vampires and Demons (the name given to all of the creatures who are neither Human, nor vampire) have inhabited the earth. Lynexon, after taking his final test to become a Protector: someone who protects other humans from violent demons and vampires, discovers his entire town, including his Foster father and teacher, murdered by the very people who he had refused to stop on his way back. He begins his search for revenge, but finds that who he seeks is the very one responsible for the very grim situation on Earth. During his search, he finds that before he can hope to stop them, he must fight his own natures that threaten to turn him into what he fights.
The Final Future: While my biggest story, it is in the process of rewriting and getting typed up.
Zero Strife thought he was a normal teenager with an abnormal problem. After waking up from a coma in February of 2004, he has amnesia and no one can find out who he is, until his sister, Kaci, finds and tells him that he is from 700 years in the future, sent back after a battle that nearly cost him his life. When he returns, nothing seems to bring back his memories, but he finds that he is/was the best hope at stopping an insane Crime boss who, due to an explosion in his Venus Prison, was given unheard of strength and invulnerability, as well as his subordinates. However, a strange woman who claims to be a goddess, tells him not to return to the way he was before, for if so, he will cause a cataclysm that would cause her other half to end Humanity's future, and that it has happened before.
The Party: (final iteration will not have Tekken Characters)
After the Cuban Missle Crisis, an organization was set up, in secret, to regulate the world's super-powers. However, the head of the organization used his influence to take control of the worlds crime-organizations and black market, and now, in 2008, invites the leaders of the world to his Island Mansion for a Party. At this Party, he kidnaps them and plans to install his control over the nations of the world. Using his power and influence, he plans on being the secret leader of the world. However, little does he know of the true rulers of society today, who step into the public in their "leaders'" absence. Little do they know that it was all going according to plan.
Please people, I need feedback and I look forward to it, so I hope you look forward to reading them.
Note: I write everything with the intention of the stories being made into movies/series/comics.
TriBlood: Slightly darker than the rest of my stories but only Dark when it's necessary to the plot. The main character is named Lynexon (that is why my name is Lynexon on here), and he is part Demon, Human, and Vampire. The story takes place after a, what is thought to be, a nuclear disaster. After it, Vampires and Demons (the name given to all of the creatures who are neither Human, nor vampire) have inhabited the earth. Lynexon, after taking his final test to become a Protector: someone who protects other humans from violent demons and vampires, discovers his entire town, including his Foster father and teacher, murdered by the very people who he had refused to stop on his way back. He begins his search for revenge, but finds that who he seeks is the very one responsible for the very grim situation on Earth. During his search, he finds that before he can hope to stop them, he must fight his own natures that threaten to turn him into what he fights.
The Final Future: While my biggest story, it is in the process of rewriting and getting typed up.
Zero Strife thought he was a normal teenager with an abnormal problem. After waking up from a coma in February of 2004, he has amnesia and no one can find out who he is, until his sister, Kaci, finds and tells him that he is from 700 years in the future, sent back after a battle that nearly cost him his life. When he returns, nothing seems to bring back his memories, but he finds that he is/was the best hope at stopping an insane Crime boss who, due to an explosion in his Venus Prison, was given unheard of strength and invulnerability, as well as his subordinates. However, a strange woman who claims to be a goddess, tells him not to return to the way he was before, for if so, he will cause a cataclysm that would cause her other half to end Humanity's future, and that it has happened before.
The Party: (final iteration will not have Tekken Characters)
After the Cuban Missle Crisis, an organization was set up, in secret, to regulate the world's super-powers. However, the head of the organization used his influence to take control of the worlds crime-organizations and black market, and now, in 2008, invites the leaders of the world to his Island Mansion for a Party. At this Party, he kidnaps them and plans to install his control over the nations of the world. Using his power and influence, he plans on being the secret leader of the world. However, little does he know of the true rulers of society today, who step into the public in their "leaders'" absence. Little do they know that it was all going according to plan.
Please people, I need feedback and I look forward to it, so I hope you look forward to reading them.
Note: I write everything with the intention of the stories being made into movies/series/comics.
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