.::::SA-MP 0.2 PuBlIc BeTa 3 VIDEO!::::. (t00k mEh AgEs!!!)......

[Jay]

Thanks guys lol,

Is there anyway I can improve it? Thats what I wanted to know for future videos

[azerty]

[modbreak]This ain't no warez discussion.[/modbreak]
delete my post then 

[Jay]

1) Offtopic

2) You can be muted for discussing that, Tjj, Modbreak?

3)

Thanks guys lol,

Is there anyway I can improve it? Thats what I wanted to know for future videos

Hellloooooooo?

[tomozj]

You can improve it by making it more gripping the whole way through. Give us something we really want to watch... like something we want to find out what happens at the end. Or, cut down on repeating the same scenes over and over again. Playing music we really like also helps.

I've moderated out the comments for you :-  next time please could you use the Report to Moderator function - that way it will be on record for us to view and discuss easily.

-tj

[Jay]

kk lol thx! But If clips are shown for to long they get boring!

[[AF]TopMan]

more killing !
and the 1st bit were it says Grover Presents looks like Grobe Presents

[Jay]

So the font is bad  kk thx al remember this for in future

[Jay]

Do you guys think my part 2 was a bit of an improvement then?

[Joeri]

yea, the font is better, timing is better...
points out of 10.... 7

[Jay]

thx