Back to school :D

[HaZe]

err quit making fun of kids.. old people like you shouldnt even playing video games now should they? 

[Candy]

err quit making fun of kids.. old people like you shouldnt even playing video games now should they? 

Who says I am old? I have a better explanation. I pay attention in English class. Arguing about my age would really be pointless because I'll always be right.

Here, let me give you a hand there.
Err, quit making fun of kids. Old people, like you, shouldn't even be playing video games now should they? 

[KRiiSSY]

      It's somewhat embarrassing how all of these children are still attending school, yet, I'm older and done with all that yet..They are better at photoshop then me by their fancy-shmancy signatures, their admin ranks on this server (BoogerJay really), and etc, etc.

      On another note, once you get back on SA-MP After getting home from school, I can school you some more after that and teach you a few skills. lol

hahaha ya know cuz thats really funny, please i don't need "skills" from you and i'm pretty sure no one else does either..

[Jay]

Shit Start work tomorrow

[Candy]

Shit Start work tomorrow

Best of luck!

[Usagi]

hahaha ya know cuz thats really funny, please i don't need "skills" from you and i'm pretty sure no one else does either..

    Well, first off...Maybe you shouldn't get on GTA. Not because I'm scared, but, because you might want to pay more attention in school itself. Non-capitalization, no use of punctuation, misspellings (cuz = because). Your sentence should read as below:
"Hahaha You know because that's really funny" (Incomplete sentence fragment - don't know exactly what you were trying to say) "Please, I don't need "skills" from you and I'm pretty sure no one else needs them either."

I'll give you a D or 65%. Why such a high grade you ask, well, you didn't use numbers in your sentence like "no1" Good job.

Then again, maybe you need to work on SA-MP as well, because I dug up a nice little screenie of you and you don't seem to be so amazing there either:

chris5170 link=topic=1851.msg33644#msg33644 date=1189555907]
....Oh yeah, look at this other one. So close nooblet95! So close...maybe not. :p

P.S. Sorry - Chris' grammar wasn't correct either, fixed that as well.

[tBKwtWS]

    Well, first off...Maybe

Did you miss the space bar? And you started with 5 spaces.

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Anyway are you practising for teacher? 1 tip the ... should be a , followed by a space and then you should remove the capital letter on Maybe. Else your first sentence is incomplete. I am just a Dutch boy who had English class 2 hours a week for 5 years, so do not take my word for it.
My point is lay off the kids who might not even be English and if you wish to correct people, consult not only your own brain but use a book.
Oh and you did not know what cuz means? Do not tell me if you use the short message service, that you open and close your letters properly, cuz noone does!

Good luck correcting the rest of the forum and me and I hope t see you again when you are finished.

Godspeed,

MaH

Post Scriptum: I grade you a 8,5 for the last message: 1 incomplete sentence, 1 missing spacebar, not correctly opening or closing the message, using a . after a ) and not at the end of the line or sentence and you are a bit condescending. (most people do not like that and  when you try to help som1 it will lose its value to the subject, always give a comment and a complement)
Post Post Scriptum: You should try a didactic course!

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Wtf el post-war, forget I said anything I retreat and yes you can type English very well. Actually I like the spaces thing, but that was not my point.
Your grade will be changed to a 10 but you will get noted for rebellion and disrespect for authority and other users on here.

P.S. Is it not correct that when like teachers in high school stand corrected they feel offended and use their power t get their way anyway, right? Or should I have acted differently?

[BoogerJay]

Anyways ladies... How about for Studio Art, I have to sketch my WHOLE room! This is bad too because I forgot my sketch book in school. Also, to top it all off I have work in less then 4 hours.

This is not going to end up well at all.

[Usagi]

Did you miss the space bar? And you started with 5 spaces.

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Anyway are you practising for teacher? 1 tip the ... should be a , followed by a space and then you should remove the capital letter on Maybe. Else your first sentence is incomplete. I am just a Dutch boy who had English class 2 hours a week for 5 years, so do not take my word for it.
My point is lay off the kids who might not even be English and if you wish to correct people, consult not only your own brain but use a book.
Oh and you did not know what cuz means? Do not tell me if you use the short message service, that you open and close your letters properly, cuz noone does!

Good luck correcting the rest of the forum and me and I hope t see you again when you are finished.

Godspeed,

MaH

Post Scriptum: I grade you a 8,5 for the last message: 1 incomplete sentence, 1 missing spacebar, not correctly opening or closing the message, using a . after a ) and not at the end of the line or sentence and you are a bit condescending. (most people do not like that and  when you try to help som1 it will lose its value to the subject, always give a comment and a complement)
Post Post Scriptum: You should try a didactic course!

    The spaces were for starting a paragraph, or simply, a new idea. Well, the "..." which is called an ellipses represent a break of thought. Like there is more that could be said there, but, is not.
Example: "I have a to purchase a hair dryer, broomstick, a bushel of bananas, as well as a litre of oil; I have to buy a lot of things."
can be cahnged to, with the power of ellipses, to this:
            "I have to purchase...a lot of things".
    You most certainly have a valid point though with the ",". I do use the ellipses too much in place of the comma. But no, I'm not practising (actually spelled "practicing") to be an English teacher, but ejamacation am good. 
    I should use a book when correcting people, but most certainly not the internet. I guarantee, although, that if you look up what I say I am correct. I would not say it without being fully positive on the issue.
    By the way, I do actually know what "cuz" means. It's slang (incorrect) English for the word "because", or, sometimes used for the word "cousin". I most certainly do not use the "short letter system" as you call it, I do in electronic mail, but not on forums - Hahaha, please. (incorrect comma use on my own part because "Hahaha" isn't a word)

      Lawl at "Good luck correcting the forums" Ha! If I could only stay alive long enough to correct every post in this forum, and/or any other forum I am involved in. Thank you, although, for your wishes of kindness and completion.

      Only an 8.5?! Maybe my post will persuade you to a higher grade? Hrmmm? How about it, mister?

[Usagi]

Anyways ladies... How about for Studio Art, I have to sketch my WHOLE room! This is bad too because I forgot my sketch book in school. Also, to top it all off I have work in less then 4 hours.

This is not going to end up well at all.

    You are a very busy man, young sir. Although, let me tell you...This isn't too bad. You have all today to do it before school starts again, and Candy I know is in college, doing art, and literally she spent ALL day yesterday making replicas of art works by famous people. . . Just remember - you don't have it as bad as some others.

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Sorry for double post!!! Accident!!! I swear. I messed up some how. I think because someone posted before I wrote it.