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Pedantic rant
#1
I've seen some new B&A forums popping up all over the place and noticed that the clan information paragraph is being copied and pasted each time. I think it would be beneficial to expand and update it a little bit:

"We are the B&A Clowns, and we come from the LVP server. We started off as a gang late 2006, fighting off several gangs. We were notorious for our heavy clownage, and rivalry with an enemy gang - the ColdThugZ. For months we remained a LVP-only gang, but recently there's been some lack of activity. We converted into a clan today, and took the [BA] tag. We're open to anyone who'd like to join. See the application here."

1) I would advise that the "lack of activity part" be changed as this is a negative comment to make and undoubtedly does nothing to encourage interest.

2) "Today" refers to the present; B&A formed into a clan some time ago now.

3) "See application here" - Isn't B&A invite only?

You can find this paragraph at the following locations:
http://forum.sa-mp.nl/index.php?topic=297.0
http://gtat.dracoblue.net/forum/gangs/ba...s-/8784/0/
http://gtat.dracoblue.net/gang/bassie-adriaan/1907/
http://gta-mp.littlewhitey.com/index.php?topic=1725.0
http://forum.sa-mp.co.uk/index.php/topic,881.0.html
http://forum.sa-mp.co.uk/index.php/topic,163.0.html
http://clowned.bigforumpro.com/the-clown...lan-t1.htm

I would suggest coming up with something a little more coherent and informative then getting all of the start posters at the respective forums to update the post. Anyway, that's just my opinion. Take it or leave it  :+

And no, I'm not rewriting it.


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#2
I agree.  Darkfire and Carcass... get to it!
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#3
I agree 100%
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#4
rsole is on watch  :P
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#5
Indeed, I'll talk with Carcass.
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#6
We are the B&A Clowns, and we come from the LVP server. We started off as a gang late 2006, fighting off several gangs. We were notorious for our heavy clownage, and rivalry with an enemy gang - the ColdThugZ. For months we remained a LVP-only gang but last year we converted into a clan and took the [BA] tag. As of now, we are invite only so if you're interested just hang around with us on IRC or LVP and you may get invite.

Good enough? sry double post.
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#7
Good lookin' out RSole,
(07-08-2008, 10:42 PM)Darkfire link Wrote: We are the B&A Clowns, and we come from the LVP server. We started off as a gang late 2006, fighting off several gangs. We were notorious for our heavy clownage, and rivalry with an enemy gang - the ColdThugZ. For months we remained a LVP-only gang but last year we converted into a clan and took the [BA] tag. As of now, we are invite only so if you're interested just hang around with us on IRC or LVP and you may get invite.

Good enough? sry double post.

1. and you might get invited
2. and you might get an invite

Correct me if I'm wrong, it's late  8)

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#8
Dunno, carcass did copy this to me, he should be good in English, right? :P
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#9
Nah, he's canadian, and his name is Shane.
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#10
Ok, Joe.
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