03-08-2008, 05:36 PM
First of all, the prefix (which you have now used [Blog] for) needs to be a category, e.g. [Feature], [General] etcetera.
"..but steadily taking form." - Perhaps "taking shape" sounds better?
"Also, the Pirate Ship handler is all but finished" - You're saying it's not even in the planning fases yet, let alone finished. I recon you mean something like "On top of that, the Pirate Ship handler has been completed as well".
"Currently the development team are" - The development team is or The developers are. There's one team, but multiple developers.
Next to that, good
"..but steadily taking form." - Perhaps "taking shape" sounds better?
"Also, the Pirate Ship handler is all but finished" - You're saying it's not even in the planning fases yet, let alone finished. I recon you mean something like "On top of that, the Pirate Ship handler has been completed as well".
"Currently the development team are" - The development team is or The developers are. There's one team, but multiple developers.
Next to that, good