Too specific on certain points. You need to leave room for people to use their imagination.
Don't elaborate here - word it something like:
The recession certainly does appear to be improving. There are many new options and features for properties. Business appears to be booming resulting in more frequent, higher, earnings! A lot of businesses have decided to expand as well.
Again - don't show this picture off. Just mention the excessive improvements to the interface and let them use their imagination
EDIT: meh, it is a good picture though. fair dos
Perhaps there could be room to mention the new Haystack minigame, Spray tags and excessive stunting improvements?
Also: how about using this picture at the start, since we've already used that logo in the screenshots.
![[Image: 294large.png]](http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab259/xBlueXFoxx/294large.png)
(04-20-2011, 12:51 AM)xBlueXFoxx link Wrote: Words on the 'Recession'
Is the recession getting better? There is predicted to new payout times on properties, we are glad to say we are bringing back 1 minute payouts! We shall also be adding a few more properties to run around San Andreas to purchase and explore.
Don't elaborate here - word it something like:
The recession certainly does appear to be improving. There are many new options and features for properties. Business appears to be booming resulting in more frequent, higher, earnings! A lot of businesses have decided to expand as well.
Quote:User friendly HUD and interface?
A small preview of the new (alpha) HUD and derbies
![[Image: 314cvw0.jpg]](http://i52.tinypic.com/2m78z8y.jpg)
Again - don't show this picture off. Just mention the excessive improvements to the interface and let them use their imagination
EDIT: meh, it is a good picture though. fair dos
Perhaps there could be room to mention the new Haystack minigame, Spray tags and excessive stunting improvements?
Also: how about using this picture at the start, since we've already used that logo in the screenshots.