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[Richard]

Aangepast, minder cool-gebruik, en wat uitleg over 2.0

Top.

offers. > offers!
on the player profiles > on player profiles
something new > something new:
the higher your level. > the higher your karmalevel will be.

Prima.
Vind het met "the" beter.
Ja, staat nu ; en had : moeten zijn inderdaad.
Mja, maakt niet heel veel uit imo.

you will have the the player > you will have to be the player
which to which date > gewoon een maand vanaf de release

Err, ja.
Ja, dat weet ik nu nog niet hè


Edit: Rewrite van Harry nog, voor de 2e:

To celebrate the release of the new website, and the relaunch of Las Venturas Playground, we have come up with a contest. This contest, of course, comes with a great prize! You can win a completely, free nVidia PNY GTX 260-OC video card! Everyone, excluding Las Venturas Playground crew, is able to participate. So what does one have to do to win this brand new video card? The answer is simple: Just have fun on the services Las Venturas Playground has to offer. As you can see on the players profiles, we have introduced something new, Karma. Every single registered player has their own Karma level. In order to win the video card, you will have to be the player that earns the highest Karma level within a month. From which to which which date this will happen, has yet to be determined. Play on Las Venturas Playground, join in on IRC, post on the forums, and who knows, you may just be the winner of this contest! And with that, put this completely new video card in your computer!

The contest is open to every registered player, this does not only include newly registered players, but also people who have been on Las Venturas Playground for years. Everyone has an equal chance of winning.

If you are registered already, there is nothing more you have to do but use our services. If you haven't registered yet, you can do so on our registration page. After a month we will personally contact the winner and announce it on this very website, the forum, and other Las Venturas Playground services.

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The Las Venturas Playground Management