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(07-08-2008, 10:42 PM)Darkfire link Wrote: We are the B&A Clowns, and we come from the LVP server. We started off as a gang late 2006, fighting off several gangs. We were notorious for our heavy clownage, and rivalry with an enemy gang - the ColdThugZ. For months we remained a LVP-only gang but last year we converted into a clan and took the [BA] tag. As of now, we are invite only so if you're interested just hang around with us on IRC or LVP and you may get invite.

Good enough? sry double post.

That's a half-arsed attempt (blame Carcass), it needs rewriting completely to be honest. The paragraph doesn't do B&A any justice - it could be much, much better. I vote for Salvo to write a new introduction and a little background information.
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Messages In This Thread
Pedantic rant - by Ronald_McDonald - 07-08-2008, 08:42 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Xen0n - 07-08-2008, 08:43 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by HaZe - 07-08-2008, 09:23 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by [BA]Scream - 07-08-2008, 10:21 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Darkfire - 07-08-2008, 10:31 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Darkfire - 07-08-2008, 10:42 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Salvo - 07-08-2008, 11:11 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Darkfire - 07-08-2008, 11:13 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Salvo - 07-08-2008, 11:14 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Darkfire - 07-08-2008, 11:27 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Ronald_McDonald - 07-08-2008, 11:57 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Salvo - 07-09-2008, 12:19 AM
Re: Pedantic rant - by HaZe - 07-09-2008, 01:05 AM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Darkfire - 07-09-2008, 01:14 AM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Salvo - 07-09-2008, 01:50 AM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Ronald_McDonald - 07-09-2008, 08:08 AM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Salvo - 07-11-2008, 04:00 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Greyfox - 07-11-2008, 05:02 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by 8Ball - 07-19-2008, 08:54 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Buhu. - 07-08-2008, 11:40 PM
Re: Pedantic rant - by Salvo - 07-08-2008, 11:42 PM