04-02-2007, 11:06 AM
Nice one. Just a few things:
• The backgrund music was ko for 10 seconds at the beginning, but all the way through got quite annoying
• With the background music, you left car radios on - music jumble
• The story could've been speeded up a little, as it can get a little boring
Other than though, looking good!
-tj
• The backgrund music was ko for 10 seconds at the beginning, but all the way through got quite annoying
• With the background music, you left car radios on - music jumble

• The story could've been speeded up a little, as it can get a little boring
Other than though, looking good!

-tj