Typo: 2nd line:
should be:
Also, Instead of referring to "sticking to vehicles", you should reffer to "Grabbing a hold of vehicles", sounds nicer, and will make people wonder
Oh, and another:
Dosn't really sound right, should be:
Code:
of which some you know already from theshould be:
Code:
of which some of you may know already from the.Also, Instead of referring to "sticking to vehicles", you should reffer to "Grabbing a hold of vehicles", sounds nicer, and will make people wonder

Oh, and another:
Code:
to ship-fight or shoot at the ship.Dosn't really sound right, should be:
Code:
to shoot or fight on the Pirate Ship in Las Venturas.